My song...

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 20:38:19 ET I have written a song and I like it. It's a nice song... but a little sad. here it is. "Outspoken Silence"UPDATED Pressing pen to page like those before me Never understanding the lies anymore New thought New ground and I am stumbling... Accepting the inevitability of a broken heart The latter of a love-hate story A pursuit of glory Another of today’s sweet lies (it's so hard...) Flowing forth on the wings of 'why' Never stopping to follow through So are you? Are you? Rolling and falling from your lips(it's so hard...) Accepting the inevitability of a broken heart The latter of a love-hate story A pursuit of glory Another of today’s sweet lies (it's so hard...) For life is a bitter prose written in pink And the truth is far more complex than you think Did you ever think to ask me... Did you ever think to ask me... (this part fades out) Yup yup... I had written the lyrics a while before and was just playing around with some chords and these cool tones just kind of started showing up and it all made sense. I am in a good mood.

Siren 2004-02-04 20:40:32 ET That's a nice song.

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 20:44:26 ET Thank you... I like it too. Except for the "al-a-carte" thingie... sounds a little strange to me but oh well. It's still a work in progress.

Siren 2004-02-04 20:44:55 ET You're welcome.

Neko2631 2004-02-04 20:46:27 ET That's beautiful, luvvy. But yes, the a-la-carte thing is a little wierd. ^^ You deserve the good mood though. ^_^ Also! I think that you should just give me your phone number or sommat so that I can talk to you more than once a month. ^^'

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 20:50:28 ET hmmm... is this a trick? I haven't seen what you look like!! I don't just hand out my phone number to any "supposedly" hot girls I just meet online...

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:00:37 ET Hey hey hey!! I never said that I was hot! O_O

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:03:59 ET Well I believe that you are until proven otherwise.

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:04:17 ET Quite the contrary, actually!

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:05:05 ET You people assume that just because I am adorable and loveable and wise that I must be a betty! Well if I WERE a betty, I would probably also be a horribly snotty person!

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:05:19 ET Ach... you who can never take a compliment. Bleh!!

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:06:37 ET That's just a horrible mass generalization on outer beauty...

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:16:09 ET I concurr, but on outer beauty it remains.

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:20:10 ET ooof... well i know some nice smart, beautiful people that just want to be loved as much as you and i.

NeonDream 2004-02-04 21:22:50 ET i like that, alot. good job =)

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:23:27 ET well thank you too!!

NeonDream 2004-02-04 21:24:21 ET heh anytime. tis beautiful

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:24:56 ET I'm glad you like... I like it very much too.

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:25:00 ET Wait...what? Oo

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:26:59 ET I know some beautiful people that are both smart and NICE that might argue with you. Everyone just wants to be loved!!!

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:30:42 ET Oh, oh I concurr whole heartedly. It's just that I blame the sort of person that I am today on the fact that I was a social leper through at least 8th grade. If I had been beautiful all my life, I don't know that I would have learned to be compassionate.

NeonDream 2004-02-04 21:34:08 ET i know where you are coming from. elementry-7th grade i was the weird girl no one would talk to. now im the weird girl that SOME people wont talk to. eh its an improvement.

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:35:11 ET Yeah... me, being an ugly kid since birth, had no chance at social life. Doomed to the dark cell of the "untouchables", I had to work on being mistaken for smart and funny inorder to trick people into liking me. Compassion is my only truth.

NeonDream 2004-02-04 21:37:44 ET somehow im not entirely convinced.

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:39:06 ET Yeah...when they grow up they figure out that origonality is pretty cool. The good ones do, anyway. ^_~ I was...a very loud, pushy child. Through adolescence...well I don't care to go there. ^^' You were an 'ugly' child, Cellar? O_O

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:39:34 ET Convinced that I am "compassionate"? I am very compassionate!! I try to be a nice boy everyday!!

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:41:04 ET I still am an "ugly" child...

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:43:12 ET Ohhhhh like HELL you are.

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:44:29 ET Bleh... don't let the smile or the "wannabe" six-pak fool you!!! I am an ugly ugly child.

NeonDream 2004-02-04 21:44:55 ET im not convinced that you were an ugly child! or still are for that matter! and you dont nessicarily have to be incredibly attractive to be liked (though most the time it works that way unfortunately) ...theres lots of illiterate, unfortunate-looking pieces of highschool waste that somehow managed to fuck their way up the social totum poll.

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:46:07 ET hmm... man... life would have been so much easier if I'd done that.

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:47:26 ET Oh yes, people have a biological tendency to assume the best about attractive people, give them more chances, let them get away with more, and to like them more from the get-go than we would less attractive people. We are BUILT for people interaction. We're pack animals. Even our eyes are disigned for watching other people. Unfortunate though it may seem, true it still remains.

NeonDream 2004-02-04 21:48:03 ET minus all the sexually transmitted diseases you would be marinating in! but you arent an illiterate unfortunate looking piece of highschool waste. so everything is good.

CellarDoor 2004-02-04 21:51:40 ET Hahaha... You two are killing me here. I'm going to wake up my roommate by laughing. I like how good looking people usually get paid more than ugly or average looking workers. It's a little funny when you see Bosses only hiring uglier people rather than "pretty" ones. Some reverse psychology there. Marinating... that's a beautiful image. Good one! and thank you.

NeonDream 2004-02-04 21:53:47 ET mmmm marinating in chlamydia. i sware i have an std on my earlobe from a public bathroom i used yesterday...

Neko2631 2004-02-04 21:57:03 ET *wracking shudder*

rain drop euporia 2004-02-11 20:52:06 ET I really like your lyrics. You're quite talented.

CellarDoor 2004-02-11 20:56:26 ET rain drop - Hey... thank you very much. I haven't even posted my best ones but thank you very much. I have a poetry page with a bunch of stuff on there if you would like to check them out.

rain drop euporia 2004-02-11 20:57:10 ET I will definately check them out

CellarDoor 2004-02-11 21:01:29 ET Wahoo!!! Here's the site: http://pushpop4411.diaryland.com/index.html Let me know what you think.

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