"I hate to shatter your ego but this ain't the first time"
2005-08-16 20:22:54 ET

Across from the city marked by the grave
The lights go out and the screen goes down
And it's just you and me with the jealousy to make this three
Yeah you know what they say about a crowd
Happiness is with the wind right now
And all you have is me
It's only me

Yeah this is the movie where the hero dies
And the audience goes home to somehow justify their lives
And it's just you and I
Just you and I alone angel

Don't you look down now or you may lose footing or even face
Better look into my eyes and imagine them pale, cold, hollow and out of place
Or even better yet with tears running over and down shuddering sobbing cheeks
Down the lines where the sad and the lonely meet
With all the credit you deserve
Wouldn't that be a sight for the sore
Running over the curves of flesh that divide like parallel lines
Never making sense
Yeah nothing like this ever makes any sense anymore

Nothing dead or dying about a heart transfixed by an arrow
Whether it were Lucifer's own or by Cupid's bow
No nothing of dust could hold so still
As the blood red clouds loom above with unrequited lovers' blood to spill
It's a measure of being alive that I wish for
It's a message of strength to which I have no answer
And I'm left with a beep and a pause and silence
With the skeletons of chance swinging in the wind

And all I can think of is two fingers drawn
With one eye to show the way

Pride and laughter fill this cemetary of a town
This cinder block I'm riding til the end
And you're blindsided by the words and the verbs
Bent into four letters to form the thing that you've never heard
And with all the years running down the side of my face
I bet you are liking this already


2005-08-16 21:00:53 ET

Across from the grave marked city
lights extinguish as the screen goes down

you, me and jealousy makes three
about a crowd, right now, they say
Happiness glides with the wind
I am all you have
It's only me

Yeah, in this movie, the hero dies
the audience departs satisfied
their lives somehow justified
after, it's just you and I
Just you and I alone angel

Don't you look down, you may lose footing or face
Best look in my eyes
picture them pale, cold, hollow and out of place
Better yet with tears tumbling down shuddering sobbing cheeks
Down lines where the sad and the lonely met

the credit you deserve would be a sight for the sore
Running the curves of flesh divided like parallel lines
Never makes sense
Yeah, nothing like this ever makes any sense anymore

Nothing dead or dying about a heart transfixed by an arrow
Whether it were Lucifer's own or by Cupid's bow
No nothing of dust could hold so still
As the blood red clouds loom above with unrequited lovers' blood to spill
It's a measure of being alive that I wish for
It's a message of strength to which I have no answer
And I'm left with a beep and a pause and silence
With the skeletons of chance swinging in the wind

And all I can think of is two fingers drawn
With one eye to show the way

Pride and laughter fill this cemetary of a town
This cinder block I'm riding til the end
And you're blindsided by the words and the verbs
Bent into four letters to form the thing that you've never heard
And with all the years running down the side of my face
I bet you are liking this already


yes, thank you

2005-08-16 21:08:15 ET

Hahaha... yours is pretty good but i think i like mine better.

we will see we will see

2005-08-16 21:09:15 ET

filler words are good for melody

2005-08-16 21:14:14 ET

this is true... which even with the filler words... i can't even perfect the melody... but this is just a first draft...

i did like the substitution of "departs satisfied"
makes it sound better to me

2005-08-16 21:18:20 ET

thanks

i've no pride to hide plus plenty of power

I liked the ending verses.

2005-08-16 21:23:22 ET

haha... i have too little of each

thanks
they were the fun ones to write

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