A Poem from Me to You

CellarDoor 2002-12-18 23:24:17 ET I wrote this poem a while back and I wanted to post it.. I have a gift with being able to write poetry really easily and then I am pretty creative when it comes to guitar riffs so who knows... Now I sit alone When you're not around I read aloud Just to hear a friendly voice Maybe a sound is too much to ask Or maybe it's really a choice I never made What difference does it make for in all my sadness? You were really the only one that I'll ever need Critique me please... I am very open to questions, comments and the occasional creative bashing I deserve.

dragonfly 2002-12-18 23:29:23 ET I love critiquing poetry! but I'm too tired to think right now, I'll comment again tomorrow :)

Cavefish 2002-12-19 00:01:19 ET I like it. I find it romantic.

InsertNameHere 2002-12-19 00:26:45 ET it's pretty good. how often do you write? and now, time to show off the mad talents... quick, gimme a word or phrase and watch it turn into something wonderful. or shit. i haven't done this in a while... *waits*

Sunshine Oblivion 2002-12-19 01:40:28 ET ohh...yes I like :-D Keep it up, keep postin em too!

dragonfly 2002-12-19 14:10:11 ET I like it! short and powerful, and you wrapped it up good in the end. post more!! :)

CellarDoor 2003-01-10 14:38:48 ET I write poetry pretty often and since all of you seemed to like that one I will continue to post more of my works...haha. That one was about a girl that I had been seeing and then suddenly she stopped returning my calls and just ignored me all together. I think having "unrequited emotional attachment" (notice the word substitution) is by far one of the most devastating feelings possible.

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