...i can't write poetry
2003-11-06 07:25:43 ET

Hitler On The Roof

Be my Eva Braun as we make it in the car
driving past the burning fields
headfirst into war

Feel your cold black lipstick on my Austrian skin
bringing me to heaven
with your darkest sin

Putting out my cigarettes
press them to your thighs
pierce my side with screaming
and a pleasurable sigh

2003-11-06 07:48:23 ET

..Honestly? That is slightly frightening. ^^'

2003-11-06 08:29:41 ET

i dug it. :) ...especially the last part.

2003-11-06 09:41:19 ET

LMAO. i love it.

2003-11-06 10:45:46 ET

i really like it.

2003-11-06 10:50:29 ET


2003-11-06 12:23:48 ET

Nothing frightening about it, simply one of the best poems I've ever read.

And it made me kinda horny, in a Nazi sort of way.

2003-11-06 19:40:50 ET

Aye, perhaps I should add the fact that it IS a very good poem.

2003-11-07 03:52:14 ET

Brilliant. I applaud you.!

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