...i can't write poetry

Enamon 2003-11-06 07:25:43 ET Hitler On The Roof Be my Eva Braun as we make it in the car driving past the burning fields headfirst into war Feel your cold black lipstick on my Austrian skin bringing me to heaven with your darkest sin Putting out my cigarettes press them to your thighs pierce my side with screaming and a pleasurable sigh

Neko2631 2003-11-06 07:48:23 ET ..Honestly? That is slightly frightening. ^^'

spiffey 2003-11-06 08:29:41 ET i dug it. :) ...especially the last part.

Rebelina 2003-11-06 09:41:19 ET LMAO. i love it.

allyxcore 2003-11-06 10:45:46 ET i really like it.

Enamon 2003-11-06 10:50:29 ET Gracias.

the tom thing 2003-11-06 12:23:48 ET Nothing frightening about it, simply one of the best poems I've ever read. And it made me kinda horny, in a Nazi sort of way.

Neko2631 2003-11-06 19:40:50 ET Aye, perhaps I should add the fact that it IS a very good poem.

skatalite 2003-11-07 03:52:14 ET Brilliant. I applaud you.!

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