my eyes r rolliong around and around on the carpet
2003-01-18 09:28:55 ET

"The night has fallen down the staircase
And I, for one, have felt its bruises
Equilbrium; inebriated
Our social graces have been displaced

As we sink deeper into the drink
The volume increases....
Night time resurrects fault lines
Silent wars -- rumble somewhere below
The surfaces verses...

The shoe is dropped, lungs explode
Shards of words of a shattered voice
And there's still a hole where the phone was thrown"


2003-01-18 10:31:16 ET

I like that.

2003-01-18 14:48:57 ET

awe thankyou

2003-01-18 15:03:16 ET

Wow. I wish I could write like that.

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