more written crap...
2002-10-10 06:04:59 ET

this is a short story that has been on the back burner for awhile....i'm not sure if i like how it ends at all and i might change it soon, but heres the first near finished draft....if your going to take the time to read it all waste a minute or so afterwards and give my some feedback....thats what i live for...even if all you say is that it SUCKS...

June

and yes this is a continuation off of november and march and will be all tied together with the last piece not yet finished entitled august....its a calender centered look at the elements (earth = november, air = march, water = june, fire = august), and death....theres even more layers to it but that will become apparent later...


2002-10-14 13:56:56 ET

Oh Peter, Peter. If only you published this stuff you call "crap".....

2002-10-16 07:17:03 ET

publishers won't touch my stuff with a ten foot pole....at least the longer stuff...i guess i should look into trying to push these shorts though....thanx

2002-10-17 18:14:09 ET

anytime

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