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Hú Huiss
nicedream
2005-03-29 04:14:07 ET
a ship
pushing through
heavy water
with no passegners
the hull is rusten
and cracked
the water seeps in
the sun is up
but covered with grey
and fog
the water is black
and imperfect like glass
as it seeps through the cracks
the only colours that are seen
are grey, brown,
and black
in the distant fog
a light
shining from at house
the land is near
and covered with rock
with black breaking the shore
then as life began to show through the house
it caught my eyes
and i fell into the black
sinking to the bottom
landing on the ground
with an ocean above me.
Jordy
2005-03-29 04:18:33 ET
Fuck, that last paragraph really got me
nicedream
2005-03-29 04:20:10 ET
thank you
every so often
i can write
Jordy
2005-03-29 04:22:23 ET
:o
You wrote that, nice!
The only thing i write is obscenely wacked out messages in my diary when im depressed
nicedream
2005-03-29 04:25:06 ET
yes i wrote it, every so often i get these little spurts of inparational writing abailities...
i dont know where they come from, but if i dont write it down then and there, it goes away.
lovelusthateyou
2005-03-29 06:08:19 ET
i like this very much<3
nicedream
2005-03-29 07:10:01 ET
arigato
Demoriar
2005-03-29 08:04:50 ET
Brent...i have written something kind of like this before. Remind me later this week and i will try and find it.
nicedream
2005-03-29 11:11:14 ET
ok ok
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