my heart
2005-04-01 05:39:30 ET

it rests with many people
but never so strongly
for one

ive hoped
and tried
and now i know there is nothing i can do

but wait...
some day please
soon


the wind is blowing
and im all alone
standing in the snow covered forest

all that can be seen is the outlines
of trees and hills
covered in blackness

you come through
in a thought
and i feel warm

just for a second
i see when we are happy
it dosent last long

but there is a hug
and a kiss waiting
inside the thought

and then i think again
how great it is
how happy we are

but then the cold is felt agian
and i see the trees
and the hills

covered in snow
and black
and i cry once more


2005-04-01 06:49:21 ET

Bah, you are my poetic idol : )

2005-04-01 08:01:05 ET

i dont relleh like poetry personally... but goodwork

2005-04-01 08:29:56 ET

its not exactly a poem, its more like a stream of conciousness. Broken, emotional, and sad.. this is how the boy thinks.

*hugs* I've been there.

2005-04-01 08:50:06 ET

Sorta shows an insight to my feelings if you look at it the right way, I think I might now how you feel.

*hugs for all*

2005-04-01 09:22:54 ET

*hugs all round*

yes, it his how i think
sarah knows best

and she knows what its Really about

2005-04-01 17:02:47 ET

*smiles* I love you. Have fun in florida, no worries. Enjoy it.

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