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my heart
nicedream
2005-04-01 05:39:30 ET
it rests with many people
but never so strongly
for one
ive hoped
and tried
and now i know there is nothing i can do
but wait...
some day please
soon
the wind is blowing
and im all alone
standing in the snow covered forest
all that can be seen is the outlines
of trees and hills
covered in blackness
you come through
in a thought
and i feel warm
just for a second
i see when we are happy
it dosent last long
but there is a hug
and a kiss waiting
inside the thought
and then i think again
how great it is
how happy we are
but then the cold is felt agian
and i see the trees
and the hills
covered in snow
and black
and i cry once more
Jordy
2005-04-01 06:49:21 ET
Bah, you are my poetic idol : )
mtshadow
2005-04-01 08:01:05 ET
i dont relleh like poetry personally... but goodwork
shadowportrait
2005-04-01 08:29:56 ET
its not exactly a poem, its more like a stream of conciousness. Broken, emotional, and sad.. this is how the boy thinks.
*hugs* I've been there.
Jordy
2005-04-01 08:50:06 ET
Sorta shows an insight to my feelings if you look at it the right way, I think I might now how you feel.
*hugs for all*
nicedream
2005-04-01 09:22:54 ET
*hugs all round*
yes, it his how i think
sarah knows best
and she knows what its
Really
about
shadowportrait
2005-04-01 17:02:47 ET
*smiles* I love you. Have fun in florida, no worries. Enjoy it.
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