Brown Paper Bar

BrownEyedGirl 2004-01-05 17:31:29 ET here i hide my face my grotesque body and shattered heart under this bag and all its brown i fear i fear what your saying is true that one day I'll be worse than you under my bag my face i'll hide away from the world my father never helped my teachers are a joke why is there a world where i must hide with nothing but hell where shall i go? how many pounds do i have to lose to make you love me i'll be surrounded by black by the time i do die. my heart will be too big and my laughter unheard my head cannot hold under this paper bag i work under this brown paper bag i hide i hate myself.

Wiggles13 2004-01-05 17:50:24 ET I thought that was such an awesome poem when I first read it.

BrownEyedGirl 2004-01-06 14:50:29 ET .. its not anymore?

Wiggles13 2004-01-06 14:56:22 ET Well it is. Just some things in it are different. Things are different.

BrownEyedGirl 2004-01-08 18:04:55 ET ??/

Wiggles13 2004-01-10 19:55:52 ET We aren't us, so it has a different meaning. It creates different feelings now.

BrownEyedGirl 2004-01-12 10:36:25 ET the poem is about hating myself? how does that relate to us?

Wiggles13 2004-01-12 12:28:37 ET Nevermind, I can't explain it.

BrownEyedGirl 2004-01-12 18:09:01 ET okay fine

Wiggles13 2004-01-12 19:22:19 ET It's hard to explain. Like I feel I helped you realize what a wonderfully beautiful person you are. Both inside and out. And I'm not sure how to say it... hmm.. I'll try to organize my thoughts.

BrownEyedGirl 2004-01-13 10:24:34 ET that would be a good idea. but i understand wher eyou are coming from i guess

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