2010-06-28 21:37:10 ET

We write emo poetry to each other.

His:
Why do I want to cry?
Every time the radio's on these damn songs just remind me I'm so far gone. From my home, my life, from you.
I just don't know what to do.
Now that I got a good thing going but the meanings not there, simply because you're not here.


Mine:
It's everything that I can do right now
To not think about you moving further off
With every passing second
And every night of this lonely humid hell
I will ask myself how badly do I want this?
I really want this

When we met we swore up and down it wouldn't be like this
It wouldn't be like this
You swore it wouldn't be like this
I miss you more than you know

Remember mosquito infested evenings
Abandoned building, no trespassing signs, and disregarded subliminal warnings
When we told everyone we were just riding
I never wanted to go home

Every morning waking up with you
Would give me hope there'd be another one
When will there be another one?

The day you left
I drew a treasure map on your hand
I thought it might take you home
And back where you belong

I'm really no treasure
But we can pretend
I must be flowing liquid diamonds
Out of these treacherous eyes of mine

It's everything that I can do right now
To not think about you moving further off
With every passing second
And every night of this lonely humid hell
I will ask myself how badly do I want this?
I really want this.


2010-06-29 06:21:17 ET

weird... this has parts of an alkaline trio song... did you write a poem around that chorus...?

2010-06-29 07:58:26 ET

I knew I mustve stolen it somewhere. That's too funny.

2010-06-29 08:49:35 ET

that IS funny, i was thinking you might not have realized... it's like the george harrison lawsuit... the song is blue carolina

2010-06-29 14:42:46 ET

Oh well. lol.

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