crystaltears 2004-12-04 15:56:00 ET trapt by thoughts that are not mine sadness is comsuming, fear is overwhelming confusion takes me over as thoughts run though my mind thoughts run circles, round and round nothings straight its all mixed up cant hear my own thoughts because foriegn thoughts rush through my head unable to catch a word, they run straight through without a pause cant grasp the concept of any of these thoughts theyre running wild while i am trapt nothings clear anymore everything is all mixed up cant see straight i think its fate but know its not cant grasp reality its all one big conspiracy

Malkavian 2004-12-04 21:05:20 ET That's the irony of awareness. It's needed a conscience to develop a thought about itself, but in its course, while analysing it, another thought ts needed to comprehend it, but then this whole idea of philosophying the act of think about a thought becomes even more polluted with more thoughts... all I can say is that the harder part of thinking about something is holding your own thought.

innerbeauty 2004-12-05 11:11:16 ET :) I like the poem. It's very meaningful.

crystaltears 2004-12-05 12:44:55 ET thankx meg some how i actually understood that malkavian, and that is a very good way of describing it, and i like the way you personalized the meaning too.

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