short story **50,000 friend points if you read it***

death by design 2002-10-03 17:43:13 ET can be found here . http://deathbydesign.batcave.net/following dont laugh its a stupid page builder thing i just copy pasted the text. let me know what you think... its actually a short snip of something with a painfully elaborate plot.. its easier when you write about it in pieces

doktor242 2002-10-03 17:46:05 ET As always, I'm quite taken with your talent, and the way you make words flow like water. Granted, I've read a lot more of it than anyone else here has, but i really feel like MetaConey is a real place, that i could go to....

death by design 2002-10-03 17:48:49 ET *is still embarasssed at lack of HTML knowledge*

The Joker 2002-10-03 18:03:26 ET I like the story so far DBD... -The Joker

Furax 2002-10-03 18:07:21 ET very descriptive...existential in style...it could be developed nicely into a nice length short story :-)

death by design 2002-10-03 18:07:36 ET **hands The Joker and doktor242 50,000 friend points**

The Joker 2002-10-03 18:10:44 ET Sweet, are these like redeemable tickets from Chuck E. Cheese's? Oh yeah and speaking analytically I especially like the transition where he closes his eyes while following the girl and opens them with his cheek stuck to the table. -the Joker

bio 2002-10-03 18:14:18 ET Damnit. I read that. I want to trade in points for valuable prizes. :[

Furax 2002-10-03 18:42:35 ET where's my points?! i was jipped!

bio 2002-10-03 18:43:45 ET 50,000 points is nothing. You get like 6,000,000 for most biomechanical entries.

pheel80 2002-10-04 06:48:09 ET i'd rather read a dbd entry 200x over a bio entry, even with the points. are you planning to learn html?

DefektivUnit 2002-10-04 13:10:04 ET psh... HTML is no problem. i can do it for you... that is, if i ever get my computer back, instead of using this wacky Mac contraption that doesn't have a decent editor.

DefektivUnit 2002-10-04 14:10:01 ET and i did like the story btw... by the time i figured out i forget that part i couldn't edit my comment anymore.

doktor242 2002-10-04 20:12:10 ET What editor are you missing? I have Dreamweaver MX on my Mac.

The Joker 2002-10-05 00:03:00 ET Dreamweaver MX kicks much ass... -The Joker

death by design 2002-10-05 14:29:18 ET hands joker , defekitv, pheel, and furax 50k points. hands pheel 10k extra for flattery

pheel80 2002-10-05 14:45:11 ET YAY!

Furax 2002-10-05 14:50:28 ET pfft! pheel, you suck up! ;-P

pheel80 2002-10-05 14:53:57 ET i'm loved. i dunno.

death by design 2002-10-05 15:31:35 ET ive caught him flattering me more than once.. he who has the most friend points gets my computer if i die

pheel80 2002-10-05 15:46:41 ET haha. yipee.

doktor242 2002-10-05 18:51:59 ET Pfft, I don't want it. It's a pc, and the soundcard's shite. </sour grapes> ;)

Furax 2002-10-06 05:32:54 ET i'd take it just for the stickers :-P

doktor242 2002-10-06 07:40:38 ET Yeah, those ARE pretty 1337.

Faint 2002-11-15 22:16:24 ET I... don't think I get it. It kept my attention, but I'm confused. What's my name again?

Faint 2002-11-15 22:17:27 ET (accidental double post... I should be asleep)

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