2004-06-08 22:35:45 ET

as a writer im always needing opinions and stuff like that so tell me what you think.


so long my friend

ive tried to be the man i am
ive tried to make you see
but you could never smile
praying your wings be repaired
knowing they were never broken

my friend so long
i cant save you tonight
my friend goodbye
i can only pray for better nights
i wish you luck
but i have to let go tonight

ive tried to give you peace of mind
ive tried to make you see
but so many scars not really there
still praying for your wings to be repaired
knowing they were never broken

my friend do you know
ive held your scars
my friend do you know
i cant do this anymore
i have to let go tonight


2004-06-08 22:40:21 ET

i like indeed...and i'm not being biased cause i know you're a cool guy, i really like *nodnod*

2004-06-08 22:46:24 ET

thank yous i had written it on vacation

2004-06-08 22:50:03 ET

you's very talented indeed *nodnod*

2004-06-08 22:54:28 ET

thanks thanks

2004-06-08 22:56:00 ET

welcome welcome

2004-06-09 07:33:06 ET

I'd say i like it but I can't without you believing that im biased.

but you already know my opinion

2004-06-09 07:51:59 ET

thank you kandess love ya

2004-06-09 10:35:15 ET

ditto =)

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