2003-01-30 04:11:20 ET

haiku #4
I wish I weren't in love
It makes for trite poetry
Why did she leave me?

Freebird
2003-01-30 04:10:35 ET

If I leave here tomorrow
Would you still remember me
For I must be traveling on now
There's too many places I've got to see

If I stay here with you girl
Things just couldn't be the same
'Cause I'm as free as a bird now
And this bird you cannot change

Oh, and this bird you cannot change
And this bird you cannot change
Lord knows I can't change

Bye-bye babe, it's been sweet, love
'Though this feeling I can't change
But please don't take this so badly
'Cause Lord knows I'm to blame

But if I stay here with you girl
Things just couldn't be the same
'Cause I'm as free as a bird now
And this bird you cannot change

Oh, and this bird you cannot change
And this bird you cannot change
Lord knows I can't change
Lord help me I can't change

Oh no, I can't change
Won't you fly high, Freebird?
yeah..

- Lynyrd Skynyrd

Some Girls
2003-01-28 05:42:05 ET

Sarah worked on south street at a second hand book store
she was half a virgin mary half a hundred dollar whore
first time that i saw her it was at this greasy open mic
she touched my arm and said i wrote a song that she liked
"can I buy you a beer?" she said. "No thanks, I gotta jet."
some girls you dont remember, some girls you dont forget

well, the next time i saw sarah, she was naked in my bed
"i picked the lock and found my way upstairs," she laughed and said
etched upon my memory's the sweet love we made
all of that cold nightime and half of the next day
will i see you tomorrow? i think its a safe bet
some girls you don't remember, some girls you don't forget

ell the next thing that i knew, she'd commondeered my sock drawer
a toothbrush in my bathroom and a key to my front door
she didn't have the sweetest voice that a person ever heard
but she'd come out to my gigs and she'd sing every word
she'd show up during soundcheck and stay till the last set
some girls you don't remember, some girls you dont forget

well i never figured myself to be one half of this
walkin round with stupid grin, stuffed all full of bliss
broke my heart to have to tell her i was goin on the road
big hazel eyes just melted me when she said "can i go?
I wont take up much room i'll just pack a cigarette"
some girls you don't remember, some girls you don't forget

we must've put twelve thousand miles on that beat up forign car
whenever weather'd let us we'd make love under the stars
both of us so happy being attached and being free
we would each take turns being bobby mcgee
we were headed for salinis, but we hadn't got there yet
some girls you don't remember, some girls you don't forget

i woke up at the closin of the metal motel door
a note left on the pillow had made it to the floor
it said "boy you know i love you but i always had this hunch
that soon youre gonna leave me so ill beat you to the punch
know that i spent all our days with not a one regret"
some girls you don't remember, some girls you don't forget

I spent about a month feeling sad and dumped
then i went to town, to find a girl who could give my heart a jump
i'd go home with anything that would have me in her place
but the only way i'd function was to think of sarah's face
didn't matter if i's nibblin' on a former penthouse pet
some girls you dont remember some girls you don't forget

well last i heard of sarah, she's back at that book store
i could stop in to say hi but it wont be like before
those days had a certain magic we won't ever have again
besides i heard she's sleepin with one of my old friends
but i wonder if i ever bubble up inside her head
am i a boy she don't remember, or a boy she don't forget?

- Adam Brodsky

Sarah
2003-01-25 22:26:40 ET

Mother said "you turn my food to poison"
To my father on a cold Thanksgiving day
The holiday's leave me with empty noise
And so I turned my head and walked away
You said I never had to have a reason
Just for feeling all the feelings that I do
summer days leave me with empty seasons
And drunken was the day that I found you

Sarah, girl you know I love you
and I'll love you for the rest of my life
Sarah, I'm always thinkin' of you
I'm so sorry I can't make you my wife, this life

no one else could make me feel as lonesome
As you made me feel on Thursday night
Because you know when the world misunderstands me
Only you can make me feel all right
I guess I thought that we could live forever
In a state of such imaginary grace
you could find your diamonds in my arms dear
I could find a reason in your face

Sarah, girl you know I love you
and I'll love you for the rest of my life
Sarah, I'm always thinkin' of you
I'm so sorry I can't make you my wife, this life

And so I softly drop you at the station
Slowly turn the key and drive away
Do you kiss my lips with hesitation
Because your just afraid of what they might say?

Sarah, girl you know I love you
and I'll love you for the rest of my life
Sarah, I'm always thinkin' of you
I'm so sorry I can't make you my wife, this life

lord, I had such plans for us

- Vic Ruggerio

2003-01-23 11:48:36 ET

Drama is what makes for good writing, right?

then why can't I think of anything?
Usually proffessors or writers will tell you that when your life is in conflict, to use that and channel it into your writing.

Well I just hit a big conflict, and I've been trying to fit it into words, and nothing seems to be coming out.

When I try to force poetry, it doesn't come.
Listening to music helps bring the emotions out, but doesn't quite help with my writing.
God, I wish I knew how to write lyrics - real lyrics, not just rambling sentiments and confused thoughts.


I need to get out dancing.
to a tune we all know well
we all know the words
and you do it so well.

It's an oldie but a goodie -
she loves someone else.
it's an oldie but a goodie -
sing along will ya?


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